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Unfortunate Hike

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My boyfriend thought of this one and asked me to make the description sound prettier.

 

Avalanche: Cold, bitter-mint snow tumbling down a dirt cliff. A heavy feeling of dread and a tang of watery blood splattered on pine trees.

 

Or: A soft gentle snowfall freezing the bubbling rivers, covering the smell of the dirt mountain and its bloodstained rocks.

 

 

Hope I didn't make it too off of what he meant. Said nothing about pine trees, but I thought it'd be an interesting twist. Might not go too good with the mint though. Hmmm... Should take one of those out.

 

Update: He liked the second one better.

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